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Postby Peewee » Mon Apr 30, 2007 2:00 pm

Ramon, you read some, so what do you think?
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Postby Ozymandius » Wed May 02, 2007 5:44 pm

Eh....

It's okay from what you've posted here. The suspense/anticipation wasn't good enough.

In the words of Gunnery Seargant Hartman:

"You don't scare me, work on it..."
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Postby Peewee » Thu May 03, 2007 8:13 am

Ozymandius wrote:Eh....

It's okay from what you've posted here. The suspense/anticipation wasn't good enough.

In the words of Gunnery Seargant Hartman:

"You don't scare me, work on it..."


Ramon wrote that btw....

there are a lot of what ifs in that story..

you know what..

show us what you got.
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Postby Ozymandius » Thu May 03, 2007 9:49 am

Give me a few minutes to think...
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Say what?

Postby thetrickygnome » Thu May 03, 2007 12:44 pm

<delurking once more>

Peter, a word of advice: Don't take it personal - I've heard that alot
lately.

And PJ, you know I think you're a good writer but I don't think you
gave that sample story enough credit. For me it was more than "Eh".

Signed- Rene Alfonso

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Re: Say what?

Postby Peewee » Thu May 03, 2007 1:30 pm

thetrickygnome wrote: Peter, a word of advice: Don't take it personal - I've heard that alot
lately.


Hu?
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